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Wednesday, June 2, 2010

The new beginning (Laura Dambolena and Cristian Matas)

It was a rainy night. It was barely possible to see the surroundings. It was raining so heavily that the entrance of the ant-hill was flooded.

It was such a disaster that the ants had to run away in order to escape from the water coming. The water invaded the place all over. There was a dense feeling of desolation, so the only motivation for them to move away was the basic instinct of survival. Then, the leader, the red ant, guided the group to a new cave that was not finished yet.

It was an enormous place. Other colonies of ants were gathering there. Although at the beginning the little red ant had thought that all the colonies would fit in the new cave, she realized that they could not. The groups organized themselves in order to finish the construction of the “new home”. Soon, they figured out that they would have to build up new rooms. The ants asked the red ant for the reason why she was doing those kind of reforms. “What’s wrong with that?” said the little red ant. “It makes room for new people”.

Finally, they could make this place big enough for all the community and now they live as only one colony.


4 comments:

Anonymous said...

IT IS AWESOME TO HAVE NOT ONLY MY MANE ON THE INTERNET, BUT ALSO TO HAVE SOME OF MY PRODUCTIONS PUBLISHED!!!
I'M PROUD OF MYSELF AND WITH ALL OF YOU GUYS!!!
C U!!
X O X O X O
LAURA DAMBOLENA

Anonymous said...

IT IS AWESOME TO HAVE NOT ONLY MY MANE ON THE INTERNET, BUT ALSO TO HAVE SOME OF MY PRODUCTIONS PUBLISHED!!!
I'M PROUD OF MYSELF AND WITH ALL OF YOU GUYS!!!
C U!!
X O X O X O
LAURA DAMBOLENA

Florencia Gonzalez said...

I like your story, Laura. It has a nice message of union at the end.

Anonymous said...

Nice to be famous,right? What a good production!!! By the way, it was 8 in the morning when we wrote the story,just saying,ja.

Cristian Matas