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Monday, May 17, 2010

An unusual alarm (by Angélica Santi and Florencia González)


It was a sunny day at Ant Town. The Red family was enjoying their breakfast before going to work. Suddenly they heard the alarm. It usually signaled the beginning of a new working day. But today it was something different. A group of collectors, who were in charge of providing food for the community, had brought some tasty and unknown delicacy. However, it turned to be very dangerous, because it had been prepared with a new poison made by humans to destroy the ant colonies.

The alarm set off when these tricky devices exploded, causing death to many of the area personnel. After the commotion, the whole family discussed at home what had happened. The father said, “I’m sorry for the victims’ families”. “What’s wrong with that?”, said little Red Ant. “It makes room for new people.” “You are right”, replied the mother, “The colony is really crowded.”

Some days later, they heard that the Queen had decided to turn the place of the massacre into a monument to remind the new generations of the danger of experimenting with new attractive stuff and to preserve the traditions.


2 comments:

Angélica said...

Our story is a bit tragic but Iit also teaches something. Could anybody tell me what?

Florencia Gonzalez said...

As anybody has answered your question, and being one of the writers, I can give our readers a clue: the message has to do with the conservatism of the English society where new thing are dangerous and changes are not very welcome.